PENDULUM INK ACADEMY
Plans & Pricing
FAVORITE LINE is a simple line that is so true, "Its easy to be difficult when difficult is easy!!!! I enjoyed the cadences, I'm a fan of the raspiness of your voice and the melody you added was nice. My favorite cadence was the 4th one with the emphasis on the first word.
aye PO this was fire bro! 🔥🔥 Dope verse and smooth with it. I believe u can accentuate even more the melodic aspects that you already do! They fit with the raspiness and bass of your voice and make it more complete like a style if it makes sense! Dope shit dude!
Appreciate the love and feedback! 💯💯
Thank you for the encouragement, I’ll drop by more often with in depth commentary! Outside of bars, my work life deals in the business of feedback 🙏🏼 + this way helps me understand how to bar out more as well!
This was gas. Actually one of the best verses I've heard from you. I think you'll get exponentially better as an emcee just from studying cadences and flow. You've never had an issue with bars and content. Also, Its great that you didnt pick cadences that seemed forced, or were so fast that you had to "chase them."
Thank you for this meaningful feedback! 💯💯
Delivery was smooth, plenty of technical aspects and the transition between cadences was seamless. Really nice 16
Ayyy! dadadadadadada, is that technically 5 cadences? You overachiever! 😝 no, but I’m lovin the flow on this. What did you use to record and capture your voice and music so clearly?
Just my phone with a speaker standing next to me playing the beat! Thank you for the feedback my friend!
definitely on count too. sounds great and creative!
Thank you! Appreciate the feedback
Lyrical intention: ultra clear!
Focal Pts: smoov with it 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰(lesson for me too, you can still do a lot without multying)
Cadence: does it change every 4 bars? I love the verse, the syllabic to focal ratio made it feel like the cadence switch happens in different spots btw quatrains (crunchy 🤩), but it seems like that was the goal
I love an in-depth review. Thanks for sharing this review, it helped me too!
Yeah the goal was to spit 16 bars with 4 distinct different cadences! Thank you for listening and the feedback! I may have overmultied lmao